Nowadays there are a lot of discuses about higher salary and satisfaction of work. In my opinion satisfying of job is more important than the high salary in the below paragraphs I will elucidate and put forward examples to support my argument.
It is tough that if you have more responsibility you earn more money, but instead you have less free time to enjoy with your family and friends so you tend to spend most of the time working. People who are addicts to work they directly affects their life style and it can be harmful for their health. Most people who spend their time on working has tired brain and body they are not be able to manage their emotional feeling and it makes a lot of relationship problems and although they earn more money, they do not have a balance in their life. It is important that people can manage their time to balance it in their family too.
In some countries it seems that people who are satisfied with their job are more trend to do more and also they do more effective. The job satisfaction provides many benefits like healthy work-life balance and success at both professional and personal front. in some researches it show that people who are satisfied with their work are more innovator and always has new idea to improve and simplification their job. It does not need to waste all your potential on the work. You have to share it in all of your life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 801.0 1615.20841683 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 168.0 315.596192385 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76785714286 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64188383034 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630952380952 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 506.74238477 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.855219591 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.5 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28437114657 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124556664775 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703565969385 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180967567361 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460883048658 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 78.4519038076 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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