Nowadays, flora and fauna around the world are threatened by mankind activity. There are two schools of thoughts, while one assure that is too late to revert the situation, other think that still there are alternatives to change the present panorama. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and provide evidence as to why there are other paths to transform the current scenery.
Currently, it is a fact that the damage caused on nature is irrecoverable in some point. This threat seems unstoppable and there is not a reliable global policy that stop the threat against nature. Furthermore, the consumer culture every day is creating massive quantities of garbage that are directly affecting wildlife. For instance, according to different researches about environment, the levels of plastic in rivers, lakes, and oceans are alarming and are menacing the existence of marine life. In short, the insufficient international policies about wildlife conservation are seriously impacting on plants and animals.
Conversely, There are a positive view that consider different alternatives for this trouble. While it is true that at present the real situation of flora and fauna is terrible, there are many initiatives from ecological groups and organizations that are running campaigns to aware governments and society about a necessity of strong policies to protect wildlife.For example, several ecological programs have accomplished a reduction of 30% in the uses of plastic bags in supermarkets; another improvement is that different nations have accorded to expand forest areas with massive reforestation plans. In sum, many people are worried about the situation of nature and they are taking action on that.
In conclusion, there is an undeniable peril on wildlife, but even if governments have to put more efforts to protect animals and plants, there are the presence of people around the world that are awakening and working to prevent and solve the imminent ecological disaster through programs, campaigns and ecological movements.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, furthermore, if, so, still, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in short, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47169811321 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9220521065 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581761006289 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.441865875 49.4020404114 244% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 145.0 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15046217426 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514011673087 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292185563258 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0829612270249 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289969816925 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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