Acts of humans, like deforestation and urbanisation have caused detrimental effect to the environment that they live. As a result, lots of plants and animal species have become endangered. Few argue that it is impossible to change this situation, whereas others say that with adeqaute measures it is possible to make the changes happen. I too agree with the second view and in this essay I will discuss both views and provide basis for my opinion.
It is an undeniable fact that ever increasing population and never ending business expansions require a lot of space and natural resources to satisy their demand. Evenutally, many forests are being destroyed for agricultural and industrial purposes and even, residential houses are being consturcted on the dry river beds making the earth an unsuitable place for other living creatures. Because of this, some people are of the opinion that this deterring trend cannot be changed. However, I believe that this negative phenomenon can be tackled by implementing and following strict measures.
Government has the primary role in safegaurding the mother nature. By enacting a strict legal enforcement, the state can bring down the environmental damages to a greater extent. For example, Industries must be guided by the law makers to adapt environmental friendly business practices and permission to build the residential plots should have to be only given after a meticulous introspection. Moreover, severe punishments must be given to the offenders and the rule breakers. Also, various awarness programs must be conducted by the government at schools and other public places to make the children and general public aware about the undesiriable consequences that may arise as a result of loss of bio-diversity.
In conclusion, as a result of human activities several animals and plants species have reached the brink of extinction. Though the major responsibility lies on the shoulders of the government, businessmen and common public too have an equal role in bringing the change. Thus, Unless the biodiversity in our eco system is proctected, humans can certainly not survive on this earth.
- In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care.Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?Gi 73
- Some people think that the government wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view? 84
- You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference.Write a letter to formal teacher. In your letter :Give detail of the job Explain why it is important to you Suggest what information your teacher could out in the reference. 78
- Education, from preschool through university, should be paid for by the government and therefore free to students.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- In recent years , many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping.Is this a positive or negative development ? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 608, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... public places to make the children and general public aware about the undesiriable consequenc...
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Line 7, column 224, Rule ID: TOO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to have'?
Suggestion: to have
...vernment, businessmen and common public too have an equal role in bringing the change. T...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, may, moreover, second, so, thus, whereas, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1809.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32058823529 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01336555571 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632352941176 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4526101743 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0625 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289069812075 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082114395288 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670548934861 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15270650629 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424022433872 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.