The evolution of technology and innovative ideas of various scientists have made consumer goods more sophisticated. Given that it has become an integral part of people's lives across the world. In my view, consumer goods are certainly a boom to society, as it enables us to save lots of time and energy. Such benefits surely surpass the drawbacks that could arise on account of this development.
It is an undeniable fact that household equipment such as washing machine, vacuum cleaner, fridge, etc have made of our lives easier and comfortable. The first and foremost advantage is that it helps us to reduce a lot of time. For example, washing clothes or cleaning the home is being now done by the above-said machines. Eventually, we are now able to use the above time to spend with family or reading books, etc. Secondly, it also helps to save energy and reduce stress. For instance, in the present generation, our professional life occupies the majority of our time, as a result, pending household chores many times creates trouble in our daily lives. The aforementioned consumer goods acts as a perfect solution in such situations.
It is true that due to over-dependence on consumer goods, the amount of physical activity performed by people has drastically come down causing health ailments such as obesity. For example, many household works are now replaced by electronic devices. Consequently, all the work that involves labour work such as washing or cleaning the house etc is ignored by the people. Having said that, the above-said disadvantage can be overcome through performing regular workouts and following a simple diet, thus are clearly negligible.
In conclusion, consumer goods play an inevitable role in today's lives of the people and thus over-reliance on them have been increased. Although it has causes problems such as making people lazy and resultingly to become obese, it can be overcome through following routine exercise. The fact that it has made our life smoother and easier can never be overlooked.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...part of peoples lives across the world. In my view, consumer goods are certainly...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my view, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1707.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12612612613 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85360824518 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570570570571 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7033486547 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38888888889 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162768401073 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488542784606 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507804877477 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106913601546 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472354112558 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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