Senior citizens in UK prefer to stay in elderly homes post their retirement, as they think that they get all the nursing care only at these centers which are funded by these governments. While most of the people say that its the government's responsibility to aid those nursing support for the old aged citizens, others argue its there family who should be responsible for the well being. In this essay, I will try to explain how both the families and government are equally responsible for such senior citizens well being in the society.
To Begin with, lets first explore, why a government should be responsible? Government always taxes people with various deduction during their employment they are Income tax and Pensions. while income tax are something which can be used for the societal and social development , pensions are the one which are deducted for individual retirement benefits. I think a part of this fund can be used for the senior citizen's benefit .
On the other side, remembering the growing population and the unemployment rate in the country, Government can only support the basic requirement of any individual as it has to be shared evenly across the overall population. This now makes the family to be equally responsible for them to support a senior member of their family with such financial aid. This not only makes them a responsible son or daughter or a relative of the old aged parent but also makes them a responsible citizen by supporting the government in lessening their financial burden. This indirectly will help the government to increase their facility as now their funds are limited by these families.
Based on the argument presented above, I here by conclude that Old age care is not only a responsibility of the government but every family should be equally responsible.This sharing of responsibility not only makes us as a proud family member but also a better citizen who makes the Country friendly across all the age groups,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so, well, while, as to, i think, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99393939394 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83479024076 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50303030303 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.4500527554 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.333333333 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279806078857 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115773878553 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426692940293 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182386039513 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568764600984 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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