Internet is flourishing by leaps and bounds and providing us new avenues while keeping updated with latest news and current affairs. With the help of cyberspace human can get all the information and make life easy too ; however it increased the crime rate too. I partially agree with the statement. To begin with, Internet is the main form of the information and also connect people together. we can get any information with a single click without going anywhere related to any filed of life. moreover it connect people with each other. people can talk and share the problem with other in anywhere in the world. As the result ,internet makes the world global village where people are become close together and sharing their experience . For example : In the recent survey found that internet increased 80 percent human access of information in few seconds. On the other side, we cannot neglect the drawbacks of internet . Internet make the human lazy and also increased the crime. in today world people are totally depending on internet they do not want to do any efforts. people cannot even use their on mind they just became the slave of internet and follow blindly internet . moreover it increased the crime too. Many hacker use innocent person identity proffe and use it for the crime activities . as the result, people indulge in crime activities through the internet and also became the slave of the internet. for example 'times of india' found that mostly crime activities is happen in remote area as compared to other area. To conclude, As coin has both sides restating; above facts internet is the main source of information ; however it makes human lazy and also increased the crime activities too. in my opinion parents should be aware that what their children are searching and what type of friends they are making on the internet
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ng us new avenues while keeping updated with latest news and current affairs. With the help...
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... anywhere related to any filed of life. moreover it connect people with each other. peop...
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...lated to any filed of life. moreover it connect people with each other. people can talk...
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... internet and follow blindly internet . moreover it increased the crime too. Many hacker...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, second, so, while, for example, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89710610932 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40732872638 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524115755627 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2730488383 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1578947368 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3684210526 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.68421052632 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0095360884306 0.244688304435 4% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00330897737475 0.084324248473 4% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00968047302104 0.0667982634062 14% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0095360884306 0.151304729494 6% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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