The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life. Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and with relevant evidence.
Undoubtedly, job security has become the term of bygone era while job satisfaction has gained its grounds as individuals are inclined towards the practice of job hopping. Owing to this, I cogitate that aiming for more than one profession is always conductive in mitigation the crisis of unemployment and proffer the passport for financial security throughout the life.
Since everything in this fast paced epoch is dynamic, thus researching for other alternative in labor market is justifiable for the job seekers at any stage of their work. Interestingly, the ever proliferating technology is marginalizing the traditional work methodology and obsoleting some career practices. Consequently, being stringent at sole career option nowadays would be insane for humans. Moreover, it would be biased to bypass the fact highlighted by Canadian Revenue Agency stating a novel development that lack of security in the job market has unintentionally forced most of the Canadian professionals to obtain multi licenses. Therefore, opting more than one career ensures the sense of security among denizens.
On the top of that, how one could overlook the economic perspective associated to this philosophy? Because distinct working alternatives amplify the net flow of capital and assist in wealthy and prestigious well being of people. Also, the wavering economic conditions and prevailing turmoil in the politics always give the birth to numerous threats to contemporary business ventures and impede the growth of ongoing career opportunities. Thus, dependence on multiple careers is preferable in order to get rid of financial woes. Notably, as per the interview broadcasted BBC News,the richest business tycoon named ' Warren Buffet' believes that people should not put their all eggs in the one basket. Hence, instead of focusing on a sole career domain, humans should work on other available opportunities.
To conclude, although in a single career individuals turn out to be exceptionally competent by undergoing desirable circumstances, still i reckon that the current instability in employment market and burgeoning financial obligation motivates people to figure out more career choices for their greener pasture.
- The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life Use your own ideas knowledge and experience 89
- You recently moved house and you used a removal company to help you move your belongings However some of your things were damaged in the move Write a letter to the manager of the removal company In your letter Give details of the move Describe the damage 95
- you would like to participate in a work related seminar in another country Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates program accommodation and cost You do NOT need to write any address 92
- After being involved in an accident you were looked after by a person you did not know before Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude In your letter Introduce yourself and let him her know why you are writing Express your appreciation A 89
- Try not to become a man of success but a man of value 100
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, hence, if, look, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, i reckon
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1890.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64179104478 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12579649017 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635820895522 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.956937043 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9285714286 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13583452306 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468313072272 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335845490605 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0798668765101 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217766412826 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.72 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 78.4519038076 161% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.