The concept of having one career during life has become "ancient" to those who reckon that living through various workplaces and even continuing education is an integral asset of the new approach.
From my point of view, being loyal to a specific company or a profession is indeed becoming an old fashioned one because educating yourself and having a plethora of experiences in different jobs are the main reasons for success in the current world further with having a more interesting life.
In the globalization and digital era, being educated and having a vast background in several workplaces for sure are the chief reasons for achieving prosperity in life. Such a set of skills that are acquired during education and getting at least the basics of a particular work can give one many fruits in the dynamic world we live in such as attaining high-quality life and receiving an abundant amount of wage. Moreover, such a resume will be eye-catching for the employers because that's what titanic companies tend to look for. For example, my significant other's father has been working at least at 10 different workplaces in 15 years, and simultaneously he was studying computer skills on the online educational platform. As a result, he was applying with a full-page resume containing many experience as well as skills obtained at the Coursera. If back then he earned about $1,000, these days he earns approximately 5 times more.
Furthermore, being loyal to one company throughout life or not continuing with education, it is guaranteed that one's life will be mundane. In other words, such rich experiences working with a lot of people and studying will provide colors to life. By the asserted notion, I suggest that life will become more vigorous and captivating. To illustrate, one might be given a chance to work overseas in an ambient of other cultures and nations, more luxuriousness such as wearing brand names or even commuting by a private plane and more memories made throughout such an adventurous life.
In conclusion, I think that the new fashion has a chance to displace the previous one, because it has more advantages in one's existence than the old approach provides to a human being.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 484, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
... eye-catching for the employers because thats what titanic companies tend to look for...
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Line 3, column 790, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[2]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun experience seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much experience', 'a good deal of experience'.
Suggestion: much experience; a good deal of experience
...ying with a full-page resume containing many experience as well as skills obtained at the Cours...
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Line 3, column 878, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e Coursera. If back then he earned about ,000, these days he earns approximately 5...
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Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... one, because it has more advantages in ones existence than the old approach provide...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, then, well, at least, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00815217391 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94096445343 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557065217391 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.0127576042 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.769230769 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3076923077 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0769230769 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350196156811 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119024641798 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858236332607 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193672455315 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575832349581 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.