If a product is sold and people buy it, then advertising is not necessary and can be considered a kind of entertainment. Do you agree or disagree with this?
If a product is sold and people buy it, then advertising is not necessary and can be considered a kind of entertainment. Do you agree or disagree with this?
Considering that advertisement is trivial and a method of entertaing if the product us being bought and sold is a belief held by some. In my opinion, I disagree since it is a vital and crucial necessity which enables brands to stay relevant, competitive and profiting.
A good reason to prove that commercials is, indeed, important is that the market currently is highly competitive, with new brands emerging daily, so staying relevant and keeping up requires marketing campaigns, grabbing costumers attention. In other words, constant advertising is a must to survive in such market.
Another pint to take into account is that any form of advertising is an integral part of any successful long term marketing strategy. Assuming that it is just entertainment would lead to detrimental loss in the number of prospective costumers. This is exemplified by mega fashion retails, despite being well known all over the globe they maintain and reassure their presence through diverse forms of advertising, whether it was televised or in the press. They continue to preserve their status as well as gain new clients.
Finally, the undeniable outcome of advertising is its psychological effect on the subconscious mind, using visual memory to imprint a product, leading to automatic attraction and affinity once it is seen, where it has been proven to be a successful tactic over and over again. This path is a guaranteed one for companies aiming at spiking their sales. Moreover, it can bring financial gains to struggling companies looking for a safe exit from plumping sales.
In conclusion, Utilising advertisement is mandatory for companies who want to increase its sales, stay relevant and be competitive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 284, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
... other words, constant advertising is a must to survive in such market. Another pint...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, moreover, so, then, well, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14802631579 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02127547947 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648026315789 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.429858066 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.785714286 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369250438456 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127246760716 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.198110407056 0.0667982634062 297% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238996286392 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.342557476811 0.056905535591 602% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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