with the increase in global warming, some may suggest that human race should move to other planets,while others might opine to take measures for the sustenance of or mother Earth. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

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with the increase in global warming, some may suggest that human race should move to other planets,while others might opine to take measures for the sustenance of or mother Earth. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

The average temperature of the Earth's surface has increased at an alarming rate. This has led to the opinion that human beings should move their residence to some other planets. However, others are of the view that people should implement mechanisms to preserve our home planet. One can see that, the human activities such as combustion of fuels and burning of plastic has been increasing the Earth's natural green house effects.

On the one hand, the advancements in space travelling as well as ongoing projects like Lunar mission would be made it possible to abandon the Earth and start living in martial lands. Rising sea levels and extreme weather conditions hasten our mother Earth on the verge of extinction. So, it is inevitable for human race to find and alternate shelter. But this arouse a question that human activity would be a real threat to other planets as well.

To ponder profoundly, disciplined behaviour of human beings towards the Earth can rescue our planet from extinction. Also, being conservative in the usage of natural resources and declining the usage of harmful products such as plastic - the bottles, bags, and polystyrene wrappings. The tons of plastic waste floated in the water bodies during the Kerala deluge clearly revealed that human activities have damaged the environment.

To conclude, I opine that, providing awareness to human is the need of the hour to save the Mother Nature,Also, the scale of potential impacts is uncertain, hence it is imperative to pursue researches to find an alternate shelter in the coming future.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 106, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Also
...ed of the hour to save the Mother Nature,Also, the scale of potential impacts is unce...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, so, well, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11284046693 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67303638026 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618677042802 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2095608425 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197753495403 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747825248059 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663401189662 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111302927001 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760946305662 0.056905535591 134% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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