An increasing number of children are overweight which could result many problem when they grow older. Both the terms of their health and health care costs.
-why do you think so many children are overweight?
-what could be done tosolve this problem
An increasing numbers of children suffer from obesty problem.it is a fact many ways in their children life. Even when they are grow with age, they were suffer from many health problems. In addition, they also give big amount for solve this problem. I will discuss the causes of this problem and solution on upcoming paragraphs.
There are multifarious reasons why the children suffer in overweight problems. Premier league, in fast pace of life children have much stress of homework. Because the schools have give homework to learners in big quantity and they do not give time for physical activity. In addition after Done the study they feel tired and they can sleep and in that way they gain our weight.
There are many reasons for solve this problem if the government should generate rule for all schools to give one hour daily playing time for children so that children do not suffer with overweight problem. Because one hour is sufficient in whole day. In addition the parents are also responsible because the guardians is also picked for studies they always says for sit and doing studies. If the parents think that, the children are playing on ground for one hour daily. So that children do not affect from diseases and even they are cure from many diseases.
In conclusion, every people have their own views. I do not deny any of them. If the parents are thing for children to the playing so that children are safe from many diseases, and overweight has do not affect on children's. Because the playing time, back tissues are loose with sweet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'grown'.
Suggestion: grown
...their children life. Even when they are grow with age, they were suffer from many he...
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Line 1, column 153, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'suffered'.
Suggestion: suffered
... when they are grow with age, they were suffer from many health problems. In addition,...
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Line 3, column 276, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...not give time for physical activity. In addition after Done the study they feel tired an...
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Line 6, column 207, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... do not suffer with overweight problem. Because one hour is sufficient in whole day. In...
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Line 6, column 255, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...one hour is sufficient in whole day. In addition the parents are also responsible becaus...
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Line 6, column 358, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'say'
Suggestion: say
... is also picked for studies they always says for sit and doing studies. If the paren...
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Line 6, column 496, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...one hour daily. So that children do not affect from diseases and even they are cure from ma...
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Line 8, column 196, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
... from many diseases, and overweight has do not affect on childrens. Because the pl...
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Line 8, column 203, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...any diseases, and overweight has do not affect on childrens. Because the playing time, ba...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81412639405 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32475500684 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501858736059 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9712374739 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1764705882 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8235294118 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.35294117647 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314996616561 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102682462856 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082377594757 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204576365796 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711827955193 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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