An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the adv/dis for both individuals and companies to shopping online.
More and more individuals and enterprises buy certain goods online. Bying online would certainly be more accessible and faster however, your data may be compromised and there is less certainty over purchases.
Nowadays, it is easy both for individuals and enterprises to go shopping online. Not only it takes up to several minutes, but it may give you a greater choice in comparison with shopping offline. There are thousands of variants and you may pick what you need with a click of a button. Moreover, it is possible to choose any product wherever you are. In addition, companies can also benefit from online sales as they can gain publicity by sending numerous follow-up coupons or sales promotions whenever people purchase online. Thus, this feature will not only attract more customers but increase profits for companies as well.
Despite numerous of positive features that online shopping has to offer, it does have its flaws. Firstly, when people provide personal information, there is no guarantee as to what could happen if such information were fall into wrong hands. For example, the recent research of ABC company shows that up to 65% of people’s data is potentially to be compromised. Secondly, purchases you get in return may be not suitable for you. It may happen due to wrong size, color or specification. Thus, you should be more careful with your personal data as well as your choice.
In conclusion, while people can benefit from purchasing online, it can also lead to theft of personal information or dissatisfaction with a quality of goods.
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- Some people think that children should be taught to be competitive in school Others however say that cooperation and team working skills are more important Discuss both sides 87
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07335907336 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81922031072 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606177606178 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0123435629 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2666666667 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230967068881 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735392089308 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731864864976 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125885456499 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713090357709 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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