With increasing number of people eating fast food, which is eating too regularly can cause health issues, some people think that the only solution is to ban it completely.
To what extent do you agree?
In today's fast life most people prefers to have fast food on regular basis, which my lead to health concerns. Some people of the opinion that putting ban on these will solve the issue, while others do not completely agree with opinion. I believe, complete ban is not the only solution, while we must take others measures to control and prevent health related issues.
Fast food id tasty and easily available everywhere, thus it has become choice of many people. For instance, multiple people, take coffee along with burger etc. to their office, and have it as their breakfast meal. Additionally, when they go out with friends or family they still prefer to have junk food such as pizza etc. Having it frequently leads ti obesity, which is one of the most common issue of today's time. Addition to this, digesting these foods takes lot of time, therefore, impacts metabolism of human body. Moreover, people don not have time to exercise as burning callories earned from fast food takes time.
As a solution, restricting these food items is one of the solution, although as an individual we must consider our food habits as well. Awareness campaign can be organized to let people know side effects, eating these food moderately will not have much effect on health. Moreover, it is an individual responsibility t decide what type of food they should have as ultimately it will impact themself only. Government can also impose higher tax on such items so people can think before they buy these products.
To conclude, choosing right food to eat, matters a lot as health is wealth. In my opinion, banning a specific food is not the only solution, but people must be conceious about their food.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 213, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this food' or 'these foods'?
Suggestion: this food; these foods
...to let people know side effects, eating these food moderately will not have much effect on...
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Line 7, column 23, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to right'
Suggestion: to right
...hese products. To conclude, choosing right food to eat, matters a lot as health is...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85172413793 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44566397833 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606896551724 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.8346353811 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.9375 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284615288809 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895085350758 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629241372293 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185967850073 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651501170495 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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