Violence in the media promotes violence in society.
To what extend do you agree?
In the technology driven time, social media significantly influences people and their behavior. Digital or print media, and other environmental factors makes people violent. This essay will further discuss on this.
Firstly, television, Facebook, whats app are well known sources of social media or marketing. Some organization upload misleading content on these forums, which influences people. By watching these negative news, their behavior also gets violent. For instance, during state election in India, Facebook , did content blocking, they disgarded / deleted violent stuff. Also, Whats app, did the same level of checking of messages and videos. People's do not judge what is right or wrong, and take negative learning and gets violent with others.
Secondly, environment of family ans surroundings of an individual, have similar effects on behavior. For example, an an child, when they grew up in negative family environment they become more vulnerable to violence. Also, if they grew up in area which had some kind of war, they adapt violence easily. The study published in "ABS" magazines shows that, youth in Syria become more violent, post WAR with Americans.
To conclude, I agree that, social media is powerful medium of influencing people to become violent, also, their upbringing and surroundings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1129.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 202.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58910891089 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79607344691 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.688118811881 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.8182166473 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.6428571429 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4285714286 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101872610259 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.034048480862 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363099526984 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0601774122906 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198937928411 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.55 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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