It is considered that rise numbers of tutee are going to for higher study in university instead of working after high academy. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend in upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, numerous pros of this trend but first and foremost is they will get the highly study. To explain it, when they are going to university they gain the knowledge more about the further studies and they get the best post of any company because of their increasing knowledge. Also, they can fulfill their ambitious. For instance, a survey was conducted by the japan university in 2018 found that 85 percentile students get a good job and they provide good life to their family. Hence, they can earn the more funds for their bright future.
Shifting towards the cons, increasing the students in the university dangerous for the university life. To elaborate it, when the numbers of students grow in the university then university life like teachers, libraries, science and computers labs lack of things. With this no one any student can learn properly. To epitome, a headline was published in "THE MOSCOW TIMES" newspaper revealed that 35 percentage university had closed because lack of staffs and educational material things. As a result, all students will can never find the any good university for their higher studies.
To conclude, although universities were closed with the huge numbers of students increase yet only with university study students can make their bright future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, then, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1211.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21982758621 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6720487793 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568965517241 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5279803074 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.916666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301881485185 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115494676212 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910867313205 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213439413466 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123763695306 0.056905535591 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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