With an increasing percentage of the population communicating via the internet and text messaging, face to face communication will become a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree?
this era is the era of information and digital technology. today from a text message to video calling, from explaining a situation to recording or live showing a situation, everything is possible because of the internet. Definitely in such scenario, one may think wether this digital transmission of information will replace the face to face meetings and communication? so I actually disagree with it up to some extent.
today every news reaches from on part of the world to any part of the world in just fraction of seconds. people have started thinking digitally. while discussion many start verifying arguments over the internet and sharing information. actually, digital way of information transportation has saved so much time and money. but even more importantly it reduces the communication gap between two people, which saves so many misunderstanding and saves many relationships, businesses, jobs. In this fast working generation, everyone will have to accept this way of communication to cop up with.
even in this digitally connected century, people are feeling lonely because they are connected to everyone on the internet but physically to none. And to find that human touch they always try to connect and communicate to someone regularly face-to-face. Apart from work, from playing indoor games to outdoor sports, from celebrations to consoling someone, humans will always meet and greet personally. In India, there are mostly joint families and many of them have this rule not to use mobile phones while they are in the home, unless it's urgent or unavoidable. although this is the time of digital information and most of the population on the world are using it, data security and personal information security issues has been arised. so to maintain security and safety, many information still will be delivered in person.
so here, I have explained the benefits of digital information and technologies. but at the same time I disagree upto some extent to the statement that the face to face communication will become the thing of past. No matter how much advance the technology evolve, still there will always be need and desire to communicate information personally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, may, second, so, still, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23579545455 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00920672111 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551136363636 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2944151117 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5263157895 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15789473684 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208474257795 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651960488231 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090733027531 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149122034167 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714170065463 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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