Undoubtedly, the Internet has revolutionized the communication and takes its place in the individual's life. Many people believe that the use of the internet and instant message services has a dramatic growth and as a result of that direct connection is fading of the modern lives. In my point of view, the internet is considerably popular nowadays, due to the fact that it contains no limitation of time or place for connection.
The text messaging conversations have a minimum place restriction. It means the message sender could be in a long distance far from the receiver. For instance, supposed two lovers which are separated temporarily because of educational purpose, then the internet makes it possible to connect to each other and has their own distance relationships as long as they have enthusiastic of. Moreover, the remote conversation is one of the most regular and important benefits or usages of the networks, for example, a manager of a major company while being on his or her mission abroad could maintain the employees remotely via the internet and cameras rather than direct conversation when returns back.
The virtual connections such as the internet or a social network are unbelievably speedy. The majority of people prefer text messaging because of its instant sending message service and it is not essential to wait for visiting their friends or meeting their boss to give them information, for instance. In fact, the time consuming means nothing when using networks.
In conclusion, many people believe that text messaging correlations significantly enhanced, that might cause the individuals forget direct conversations or in-person meetings. In my opinion, social networks have many major advantages such as instant sending message and the ability of remote communication in order to remove the difficulties of face to face communications.
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- national happiness index has better performance than the economic increase in a nation's development. do you agree and how to measure national happiness? 77
- Parents are responsible for the behavior of the children. To what extent do you agree or disagree. 85
- Many people prefer to live in their own house, while others are prepared to live in rental properties. Discuss both views, give you own opinion and examples. 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 91, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...ommunication and takes its place in the individuals life. Many people believe that the use ...
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Line 3, column 683, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'returns'.
Suggestion: returns
...as rather than direct conversation when returns back. The virtual connections such as the...
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Line 7, column 177, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ct conversations or in-person meetings. In my opinion, social networks have many m...
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'moreover', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'in fact', 'such as', 'as a result', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.274143302181 0.247107183377 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.118380062305 0.155533422707 76% => OK
Adjectives: 0.109034267913 0.0946595960268 115% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0498442367601 0.0501214627716 99% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0467289719626 0.0437548338989 107% => OK
Prepositions: 0.1246105919 0.122226691241 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0249221183801 0.0403226058552 62% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.08124221663 2.80594681477 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0218068535826 0.0326793684256 67% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.105919003115 0.0861772015684 123% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00934579439252 0.021408717616 44% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.01246105919 0.011925033212 104% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1875.0 1933.35771543 97% => OK
No of words: 296.0 316.048096192 94% => OK
Chars per words: 6.33445945946 6.12580529183 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.408783783784 0.374742101984 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.331081081081 0.28420135186 116% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.22972972973 0.203846283523 113% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.155405405405 0.137316102897 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08124221663 2.80594681477 110% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.037074148 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554054054054 0.56093040696 99% => OK
Word variations: 57.6342250628 60.7387585426 95% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 24.6666666667 20.7743622355 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.2489711863 49.517814964 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.25 127.492653851 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7743622355 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.08333333333 0.814263465372 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 57.7747747748 49.1944974215 117% => OK
Elegance: 1.97101449275 1.69124875643 117% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345628113075 0.332605444948 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.103655573412 0.102741220458 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0706343558899 0.0668466124924 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.589312385193 0.534860350844 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.152431788289 0.148594505496 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157822082052 0.134430193775 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655625622256 0.0742795772207 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.421196146672 0.324371583561 130% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.082025106974 0.0638462369009 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248957772425 0.228012699653 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237219104768 0.058150111329 41% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.