Influence on modern technology on social behaviour. Discuss advantages and disadvantages and own opinion
It is a well-known fact that technology has a major influence on communication and interaction amongst people. Technology has affected the social life and relationships in various ways. Advancement in technology has both disadvantages and disadvantages and in my opinion, advantages outweigh the later.
First and foremost, technology has made our life simpler and convenient. With the use of the internet and telephone, we can connect with our relatives and friends who are living overseas, even if we are not able to meet them personally due to long distances. Secondly, services like Skype, video conferencing etc will help to see each other almost as if meeting personally which in turn creates more possibilities to interact.
Furthermore, technology has helped to create more business possibilities and sources for making more has widely increased.
Also, due to the advancement of technology, even education become more accessible and we can connect with our teachers live and in our comfort zone. Also, it will help to make new friends online and even find new common interest to benefit each other.
However, on the other hand, as we know that ''each coin has two sides'' so as the usage of technology in our life. In spite of so many advantages, there are a few disadvantages which we can't neglect. Due to the advancement of technology, the charm of meeting people in real has been lost. People feel neglected and isolated as people prefer sitting at home and interacting through social media rather than meeting in person.
Hence to conclude, technology has made our life revolutionised in many useful ways in spite of its few disadvantages which we can't neglect.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, in my opinion, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14598540146 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02075157217 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547445255474 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7675797964 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.714285714 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149262323429 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626061340623 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795247347305 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907653717645 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111618151155 0.056905535591 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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