International Tourism has become a huge industry in the world. Do the problems of the problems of the international travel outweigh its advantages?
In recent times, worldwide tourism is became more popular among different ages of people. This essay will argue that the demerits outweigh the merits. Although there are certain advantages associated with wide-spread of foreign tourism in different nations, the downsides in this case seems to outweigh the upsides.
The main reason is plastic pollution and gas pollution, which was created due to their travelling in various countries that affects the environment badly. Furthermore, their travelling source badly effect the ozone layers of the earth and disturbs the weather cycle ,which is sometimes create more danger situation for local farmers to survive. For example, Indian government made a survey last year, and reveals the main reason behind the farmers suicide is raining throughout the year due to bad atmospheric condition. The other prominent reason is cultural difference among different nationalities. Owing to that local village people and narrow-minded people feel unsafe in their home places, which is harmful to their legacy as well as their kids, who falls in teenager categories. For instance, In my town, many old aged village people not allow their daughters to go outside until they got married.
Despite of this disadvantages, some people think that it is more helpful to hand-crafted people to earn good money. In addition many hospitality business get a chance to earn more profit with less investment. For example, In Europe majority of locals find hotel business as their primary source to create funds. However, In off-season same has to survive, as they do not have any other earning area.
To conclude, International tourism Is proved significant catalyst for economic growth and employment, but it is harmful to the original culture of the mother nation. Hence, Authorities should foster the eco-tourism.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3875432526 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7605041021 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629757785467 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1242236006 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.8 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0828434714776 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0283781038041 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333251190436 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0617467677108 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453491614625 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.