Nowadays, people are enticed to have vacations in forwign countries. Travelling overseas is now comparatively easy on the pocket as it was in the erstwhile and because of this most of thw countries are welcoming visitors to holiday at their place. However, it is a bone of contention that the merits overweigh the demerits. This essay intends to delve into both the sides to reach a concluded viewpoint.
To begin with, there are myriad of pros of tourism of which the first and foremost is economical growth of host country. To illustrate, the more tourists visit any country more the residents will earn from them which exhibits the per capita income.Moreover, there will be a rise im employment opportunities as the people can start new business which will fascinate more globetrotters like Restaurants, photo- booth etc.
Furthermore, the popularity index of the place will also increase worldwide as every year global tourism survey is conducted and ranks are given to every country which in results give them monetary benefits.
On the other hand, one cannot overlook the detrimental effects of tourism. Firstly, visitors while enjoying their gala time forgets that they also have some responsibilities too when they go to visit some other place for example; It is mostly seen that travellers often put garbage all around and makes the surrounding dirty. Secondly, to make money from the tourists locals hike the prices of goods and services which also dig a hole in residents pocket.
To conclude, it is clear from the reasons aforementioned that the benefits overshadow the cons of tourism. However, government should put strict rules for the travellers to preserve the environmental conditions. Also, local councils should keep and eye on the small vendors to control the prices as they must be affordable for everyone.
- The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing.What is the reason for the growth in overweight people in society?How can this problem be resolved? 49
- International travel is becoming cheaper, and more and more countries open their door and with more and more tourists.Do the advantages of the increased tourism outweigh its disadvantages? 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...rism of which the first and foremost is economical growth of host country. To illustrate, ...
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Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...em which exhibits the per capita income.Moreover, there will be a rise im employment opp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17785234899 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86403645806 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61744966443 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.0038883113 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.692307692 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154748071324 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372478302382 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498070516824 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0709356872454 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635208917537 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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