The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Today internet has revolutionised our lives. Therefore,every bit of information can be easily accessed by internet. Infact, It is boon to the electronic world, as people get acquainted with any type of information, which was very difficult to get in the past when there was no internet. In the following paragraphs, I will explain the advantages of the internet and how people utilize its benefits.
First and foremost, nowadays, no sectors is being untouched by the impact of internet. Furthermore, majority of the functioning on computers depend solely on internet. Apllications like Internet explorar, chrome are usually run on intenet, however, without them it is very difficult to perform any official task. Morever, in the offices, it is being used on daily basis to complete the office work efficently.For example- softwares like whatapp, emails and skype , which are vital in offices to communicate are fully dependent on internet services. In addition to, searching locations on google maps and booking hotels is completelly accessible through internet. Hence, internet is providiing greater access to every software and giving every vital information.
Secondly, it is beneficial for every people from children to elders. Students get tremendous information related to their studies by internet. It not only familiraizes the pupils with every concept but also provides detailed explanation, which eventually broadens the horizons and develop their intersets. Nevertheless, Elders which are not to much tech, have little knowledge of using high technological gadgets can take help of internet to get aquainted. For example, many of the older people usually watch you tube videos to know about the use of computers, microwaves and even mobilephones.
To conclude, undoubtedly internet widens our access to every single information, data of the world which is fruitful in office works, students, elders, even to every member of the nation to get any type of information.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1676.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47712418301 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0614664619 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607843137255 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3032304368 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.75 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153497996434 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553105754881 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0258001736537 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951275776613 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0154913546607 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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