The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before.
What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?
Internet is one of the most important inventions which have changed the traditional approach of people, especially the blooming way of acquiring information. Whereas, the data available on the internet is not always authentic. Let us discuss the reasons and consequences of the internet followed by my own recommendations as remedies for solving the same.
First and foremost, the easy accessibility of the internet to everyone is a huge problem, there is no restraint on what kind of content you are posting whether it could be a disaster for society. To illustrate, according to recent news reports, two teenage friends from the United Kingdom left their homes and joined the ISISI in Syria. As they were in the influence of the terrorist group and they were following ISISI’s Twitter account where they used to have conversations with the terrorists. In addition, to secure personal information is also a concern; the increase in online frauds is the perfect example. Even though, government official websites are on the radar of hackers to gather personal details of people.
So, it is necessary to take action and combat the problems. The government should restrict the websites which can cause ill effects for humanity. However, the government can keep track of the individual who is surfing these kinds of sites to know the motive behind collecting such data. Also, parents have to play a vital role, and they need to monitor the activities of the children. They can also block dangerous websites which can be done through various soft wares.
To conclude, the internet is an amazing technological innovation that has transformed people’s lives, but not without negative impacts. However, with the right action by individuals and governments, it can be made a safe place for everyone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... blooming way of acquiring information. Whereas, the data available on the internet is ...
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Line 2, column 413, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... terrorist group and they were following ISISI's Twitter account where they ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, so, then, whereas, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20205479452 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9221842386 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630136986301 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.682420858 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.266666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189755190833 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516940417539 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443714701693 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10274844032 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230482010578 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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