The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before.What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?
The rapid development of internet since the last decade has changed the conventional way of people's life, especially on the blooming of information that we never have before. As the amount of information increase, so do the associated problems growth. In this essay, the major issue will be revealed along with some suggestions.
The most concerned issue relates to quality of data. The internet itself not only improves the accessibility of information, but also allows users to publish the information to the public. As everyone can post any information on the internet at their will, the correc...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 498, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...le from 2002, one child tried to follow a online instruction to make a bomb. Due ...
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Line 5, column 329, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'report policing'.
Suggestion: report policing
...he information censorship and instantly report to police as long as any illegal or criminal info...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'kind of', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.25 0.247107183377 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.142857142857 0.155533422707 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0595238095238 0.0946595960268 63% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0595238095238 0.0501214627716 119% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0208333333333 0.0437548338989 48% => OK
Prepositions: 0.119047619048 0.122226691241 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0416666666667 0.0403226058552 103% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.02924036736 2.80594681477 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.047619047619 0.0326793684256 146% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.133928571429 0.0861772015684 155% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0267857142857 0.021408717616 125% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00297619047619 0.011925033212 25% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1872.0 1933.35771543 97% => OK
No of words: 297.0 316.048096192 94% => OK
Chars per words: 6.30303030303 6.12580529183 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.387205387205 0.374742101984 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.313131313131 0.28420135186 110% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.252525252525 0.203846283523 124% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.158249158249 0.137316102897 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02924036736 2.80594681477 108% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.037074148 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585858585859 0.56093040696 104% => OK
Word variations: 63.4363963936 60.7387585426 104% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.5625 20.7743622355 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9077060228 49.517814964 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 127.492653851 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5625 20.7743622355 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8125 0.814263465372 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 49.8756313131 49.1944974215 101% => OK
Elegance: 1.84 1.69124875643 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.457486989499 0.332605444948 138% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.12588177366 0.102741220458 123% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0668394826246 0.0668466124924 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.593122028182 0.534860350844 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.136904591318 0.148594505496 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.200261103262 0.134430193775 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100232301544 0.0742795772207 135% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.45791673928 0.324371583561 141% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.149322237969 0.0638462369009 234% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.31694915092 0.228012699653 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726449224663 0.058150111329 125% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.68436873747 35% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 5.90881763527 17% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.5751503006 233% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.