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THe Internet provide student with a great benefit. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Công nghệ của chúng tôi và người khác. Some user thiếc that Internet has multiple lợi thế cho sinh viên. Theo quan điểm của tôi Diễn, tôi hoàn toàn đồng ý as ý kiến cho that sinh viên ngày nay have liên tục receive lợi ích from Internet.

Ngày bắt đầu, Internet cho bù sinh viên tham gia trực tuyến trực tuyến. Các loại nghiên cứu về tài năng và tình yêu. Không có gì khác nhau, một trong những thứ khác nhau. Thay liên tục , chỉ số trong nhà và thiết bị của họ. Mạnh khi, tham gia học tập trên Internet, cung cấp cho sinh viên

Con ra, Sinh viên có thể coi Internet là một trong những thứ đó. Internet là kho lưu trữ và giảm giá lớn. Dạo, của chúng tôi có thể tìm thấy tài liệu của chúng. Google có có trang web của chúng tôi khi bạn có thể sử dụng. Khan Academy, một người yêu thích tiếng Hàn, cung tên Nó tích hợp cho sinh viên học tập, tập tin và công nghệ.

Tóm tắt, sinh ra, hoàn hảo, tuyệt vời, thú vị và quan trọng. Rõ ràng là Intenet có trực tiếp và sáng tạo cho sinh viên.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 387, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'trực tuyến'.
Suggestion: trực tuyến
...e='vertical-align: inherit;'> trực tuyến trực tuyến. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1138, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...le='vertical-align: inherit;'> , chỉ số trong nhà và thiết bị của họ.
^^
Line 9, column 1121, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: có
...s;vertical-align: inherit;'>Google có có trang web của chúng tôi khi bạn có thể ...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 13.1623246493 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 10.4138276553 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 41.998997996 5% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 6276.0 1615.20841683 389% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 402.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 15.6119402985 5.12529762239 305% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 10.5061038428 2.80592935109 374% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.373134328358 0.561755894193 66% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1437.3 506.74238477 284% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 3.6 1.60771543086 224% => Avg_syllables_per_word is high.

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 470.160869337 49.4020404114 952% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 523.0 106.682146367 490% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 33.5 20.7667163134 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.166666666667 7.06120827912 2% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00262653333742 0.244688304435 1% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00233394232346 0.084324248473 3% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00407832016513 0.0667982634062 6% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00147303775197 0.151304729494 1% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00179720968104 0.056905535591 3% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 68.8 13.0946893788 525% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -131.22 50.2224549098 -261% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 26.7 7.44779559118 358% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 39.8 11.3001002004 352% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 73.85 12.4159519038 595% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 32.5 9.78957915832 332% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 27.0 10.7795591182 250% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
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Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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