It is better for college students to live far away from home than live at home with their parents Do you agree or disagree

It is strongly argued that students who want to institute their degree would be very far from where they are living. Apparently, many of us come over such type of issue when we started to pursue our study. I immensely support that studying away from home would have numerous benefits.

In the first view, currently, many colleges are providing sophisticated facilities to the students. The students who are looking for accommodation when they pursue their studies would be mostly covered with that. Moreover, students can get the opportunity to communicate with different people. And also perdominantly they do not need to waste much time on commuting. The student who is coming from college hostel would get benefited because they could get food on time, internet and also easy access to the tutors. But people traveling daily from home facing frequent traffic jams, sometimes may not attend the class regularly and may not approach hostel peers.

On the other hand, many people suggested that living away from parents would have more opportunities to act independently. By contrast, a person who is living away and staying in a hostel has to face the budget problem, some foods would not in accordance with their health, finding a suitable job to fulfill their own commitments and mental issues. In spite of many problems, this would definitely help to immensely plays how to live on their own in the future. On the other hand, if they get a chance to travel abroad, they wouldn't feel that have to face some personal things.

To recapitulate, most colleges are located long distances from our stays. It results, students, tend to choose such institutions as they are devoting a good quality of the environment as well as education. In addition, students would understand how to cope up with the situation when they interact with diverse people as well as commuting time is enormously low.

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Average: 7.4 (2 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, as to, in addition, as well as, in spite of, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01265822785 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67063109947 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582278481013 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0936346389 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229374637216 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728660325247 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466827160654 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134272309808 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313559746365 0.056905535591 55% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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