It is common practice for some students to take a gap year between high school and university in order to do charitable work abroad in underdeveloped countries.What are the advantages and disadvantages for young people of doing volunteer work?
Raising concerns about the third world countries itself is a major contribution towards the society. Children nowadays are actively participating for the wellness of third world countries. In this essay, the author will discuss both the benefits and drawbacks of charity work.
First of all, the biggest advantage is the responsibility that is strongly building up in current generation. The reason is they all are quite aware about the current situation of the globe. For example, some developed countries have already declared minor and weaker countries as a home of terrorists and have begun the war. The young generation who are far more sensible do not believe in such stories and know that such operations will not work out for this world. Therefore, those children who are optimistic have their own approach to make this world worth living such as they are providing food, clean water and shelter to those who are homeless and dying from the deprivation of hunger. By doing this they are proving this world that war is not the ultimate solution but its love and affection that takes to weeded out the hatred from our lives.
However, some children who are greatly involve in aiding these countries do not continue their advance studies and drop out in the middle of high school and university. It should not be forgotten that the education is the only weapon we have to fight against the hurdles. Education is equally as important as charity and therefore, should not be quit at any stage. Taking the example of Sir Aga Khan IV, the founder of Aga Khan Development Network who is greatly emphasizing for the wellness of humans showing the great concerns about the development of the society. He has done tremendous work and further working for promoting the education both basic and advance at the grass-hood levels. By inspiring his work, we can clearly state that advance education can make this world a better place.
I am winding up my essay on a note, it is the humanity that encourage the children to help others without any interest. However, it is also very important to remember that education should not be compromised at any stage in your lives and should be continued until you breath.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 40, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'involved'.
Suggestion: involved
... However, some children who are greatly involve in aiding these countries do not contin...
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Line 5, column 286, Rule ID: EQUALLY_AS[1]
Message: Don't say 'equally as'. You can use either 'equally' or 'as' on its own. When comparing two nouns, use 'just as'.
Suggestion: equally; as; just as
...fight against the hurdles. Education is equally as important as charity and therefore, sho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, so, therefore, third, well, for example, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1839.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.904 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56429639473 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538666666667 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4229370634 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.176470588 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0588235294 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23529411765 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152903919776 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047118553589 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501623186332 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0821571896411 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511144121059 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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