It has been noted that many people who had a big impact on the world gave themselves completely to their work and did not bother with the idea of “work-life balance”. To what extent should people try to have a good work-life balance?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Some people believe that many successful people may dedicate their time in working entirely and barely prioritize work-life balance. I completely disagree with the idea that people should only focus on their work and disregard their personal life.
There are several reasons why work-life balance is a dire need in a daily life. Firstly, it can help to reduce mental health issue. One person spending most of their time at work tends to have risk of burning out or isolated, which can have long-term negative effects on health. Additionally, taking time for personal hobbies and exercise can improve physical fitness and overall well-being. If they can spend time on such activities frequently, people can keep themselves a good health.
From family's perspective, a good work-life balance is also beneficial. Spending quality time with family members can build stronger bonds, create lasting memories, provide support during difficult times and foster a sense of belonging and connection. For instance, a child can develop well their cognitive ability if their parents can spend bonding time with them, while elderly people can live happier and healthier if their children can have a regular chit chat with them during dinner. Clearly the more they can balance between work and personal life, the happier family they will have.
In conclusion, whereas many people choose to live for work rather than for other own personal life, I personally think they should have a good work-life balance so that it can protect their health as well as improve the quality of personal family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, so, well, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21960784314 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46258897969 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592156862745 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8231189053 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.916666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346114641916 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160871631476 0.084324248473 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117587258563 0.0667982634062 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265967671644 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0857738118931 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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