It has been suggested that everyone in the world wants to own a car, a TV, and a fridge. Do you think the disadvantages of such a development outweigh the advantages?
These days, there is a firm belief amongst the folk that the modern technological inventions like automobiles and modern home appliances should be an integral part of the families. However, such advancements on numreous occasions impact adversely. However, In this case the benefits outweigh the drawbacks.
Considering the positive side, the modern inventions have transformed the human race drastically, starting from the healthcare to space travel, everywhere you can see and feel the positive impact of it and It acts like a catalyst for the path of the development. Even, the sector of personal mobility and household durables, is not left untouched and has transformed significantly. It has brought the flexibility and comfort in end-users’ lives. To cite an example, the personal car has reduced the individual’s dependency on public transport and opened up the whole new domain of personal travel.
Downside of it, these technological advancements increases the human dependence by making them vulnerable and immobile at times due to the erosion of alternatives. Specifically, in the case of refrigerators, the food producers and consumers, both relay heavily on the refrigeration at home for a numerous food items and non-availability of it makes plethora of perishables non edible.
All in all, I firmly believe that these advancements have a larger and positive impact on the society than the limitations it bring with it. The person should always be more cognisant, considerate and flexible while consuming these and must not become fully dependent on it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 127, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'brings'?
Suggestion: brings
... on the society than the limitations it bring with it. The person should always be mo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37848605578 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2095188261 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621513944223 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.9200290698 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0296759066613 0.244688304435 12% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0120539377369 0.084324248473 14% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0189675898385 0.0667982634062 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0157528834688 0.151304729494 10% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179483722242 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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