In today's modern society, the react of children have a lot of changes than the last generation. In my opinion, learning the difference between the right and wrong when they was a kid is very significant to orientate them. Sometimes, we should use punishment to help them learn this distinction.
The first positive aspect is able to orientate them to aware of the right and wrong situation in life. In growing up process, they will be go through so many situations. So we need to teach them from the smallest stuffs such as: As a child, they should be know how to be polite to adults. If the y do not, we should guide and explain for them, if they have impolite behaviours with everyone the will be got love from them. In case, they are quite impolite or rude. we should have a punishment to educate and have a warming like facing the wall. I think In some cases, adding punishment is a tough measure to help them realize their mistakes in behaviours but we do not use punishment too heavy for them like beating them because it's will cause their mental effects for the development process.
Beside that, Children can have a reasonable ways to face with realistic situations. Example, Children's habit often through out garbage in unsuitable place. However, when they are taught by parents or teachers about their action before, they will not have a habit like that. Instead of, the will throw it in garbage bag. It's just a tiny action but it will impact to their behaviours as well as their development in growing up process. For some circumstances, punishment should not be apply to them instead of we should have a convey them well first.
In conclusion, to help children have a suitable behaviour to deal with any situation in reality and develop themselves.In my opinion, learning the difference between the right and wrong at early age is significant. Also punishment is essential for this distinction however it's not the first condition to help them have a good behaviour.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 27, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
In todays modern society, the react of children have a lot of changes than ...
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Line 3, column 257, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'known'?
Suggestion: known
...ffs such as: As a child, they should be know how to be polite to adults. If the y do...
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Line 3, column 466, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
... case, they are quite impolite or rude. we should have a punishment to educate and...
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Line 5, column 45, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'way'?
Suggestion: way
...de that, Children can have a reasonable ways to face with realistic situations. Exam...
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Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
...uations. Example, Childrens habit often through out garbage in unsuitable place. However, w...
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Line 5, column 524, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...apply to them instead of we should have a convey them well first. In conclusion, to ...
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Line 7, column 120, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...ation in reality and develop themselves.In my opinion, learning the difference bet...
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Line 7, column 216, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... and wrong at early age is significant. Also punishment is essential for this distin...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, well, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75433526012 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65203452331 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505780346821 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9409304495 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3888888889 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267090207667 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869180519527 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0949054510111 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215118512166 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123599208762 0.056905535591 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 27, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
In todays modern society, the react of children have a lot of changes than ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 257, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'known'?
Suggestion: known
...ffs such as: As a child, they should be know how to be polite to adults. If the y do...
^^^^
Line 3, column 466, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
... case, they are quite impolite or rude. we should have a punishment to educate and...
^^
Line 5, column 45, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'way'?
Suggestion: way
...de that, Children can have a reasonable ways to face with realistic situations. Exam...
^^^^
Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
...uations. Example, Childrens habit often through out garbage in unsuitable place. However, w...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 524, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...apply to them instead of we should have a convey them well first. In conclusion, to ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 120, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...ation in reality and develop themselves.In my opinion, learning the difference bet...
^^
Line 7, column 216, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... and wrong at early age is significant. Also punishment is essential for this distin...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, well, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75433526012 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65203452331 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505780346821 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9409304495 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3888888889 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267090207667 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869180519527 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0949054510111 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215118512166 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123599208762 0.056905535591 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.