It is often thought that the increase in juvenile crime can be attributed to violence in the media.
What do you think is the reason for the growth in the rate of juvenile crime?
What solution can you offer to deal with this situation?
Although some people consider that teenager crime would be because of media and its violence content, in my view a variety reasons exist and I completely argue that media would be one of them. So we need to discuss the reasons raising the juvenile crime and the way to prevent or decrease its rate.
In my opinion teenager crime is increasingly committed because of some major factor such as illiteracy, poverty and media. Firstly, most of the criminals drop out of school which lead them to have no skills for a professional job and they have no regret about that, so they commit crime as their job. For example they do drug trafficking hence their employer did not look for any education. Secondly, Poverty would be another reason thus most of criminals do not have affordability to meet the minimum needs of their regular life before involving the criminal gangs. For example, suppose a poor person who does not have any place to go or any family or house, surely would be appreciate if gave him place to live and join a group to not be alone anymore. Thirdly, media would have negative effects on younger generation especially if the children watched violence movie and chose a criminal as their role model. For Example, children or teenager thought a bad boy or girl in their favorite series is cool, so this would be the beginning of encouragement of committing crime. Therefore, in addition to media, being poor or not be educated would be reasons of crime rising.
The solution to resolve this situation attracts government attention about education and economic. Government has responsibility about their community youth, so they'd better to reform education to be more attractive or interesting for teenager in order to enjoy studying and follow their interest. In addition authority better observe economic issues, in order to assure the welfare of the people.
In conclusion, some people believe that media affects the increasing of Juvenile adequacies; however, other reasons would be significant as we mentioned above.
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- It is often thought that the increase in juvenile crime can be attributed to violence in the media.What do you think is the reason for the growth in the rate of juvenile crime?What solution can you offer to deal with this situation? 73
- It is often thought that the increase in juvenile crime can be attributed to violence in the media.What do you think is the reason for the growth in the rate of juvenile crime?What solution can you offer to deal with this situation? 73
- Nowadays families are not as close as they used to be.What do you think are the causes of this?What can be done to make families closer? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the criminals') or simply say ''most criminals''.
Suggestion: most of the criminals; most criminals
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they'd
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'firstly', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'third', 'thirdly', 'thus', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'in my opinion', 'in my view']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.256756756757 0.247107183377 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.162162162162 0.155533422707 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0675675675676 0.0946595960268 71% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0540540540541 0.0501214627716 108% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0540540540541 0.0437548338989 124% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12972972973 0.122226691241 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0216216216216 0.0403226058552 54% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.69322664752 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0351351351351 0.0326793684256 108% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0810810810811 0.0861772015684 94% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0216216216216 0.021408717616 101% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00540540540541 0.011925033212 45% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2039.0 1933.35771543 105% => OK
No of words: 339.0 316.048096192 107% => OK
Chars per words: 6.01474926254 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20517956788 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.368731563422 0.374742101984 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.29203539823 0.28420135186 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.203539823009 0.203846283523 100% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.109144542773 0.137316102897 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69322664752 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.037074148 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560471976401 0.56093040696 100% => OK
Word variations: 61.491675437 60.7387585426 101% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.2142857143 20.7743622355 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0520975945 49.517814964 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.642857143 127.492653851 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2142857143 20.7743622355 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.35714285714 0.814263465372 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 53.4178255373 49.1944974215 109% => OK
Elegance: 1.51 1.69124875643 89% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391708730224 0.332605444948 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.116409194116 0.102741220458 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0545350363049 0.0668466124924 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.539970154414 0.534860350844 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.178407171189 0.148594505496 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168787698121 0.134430193775 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809135315055 0.0742795772207 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.266243432797 0.324371583561 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.120207922261 0.0638462369009 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270758613186 0.228012699653 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421089639123 0.058150111329 72% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.5751503006 272% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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