It is said that the amount of violence on the TV programs has negative effect on our social development and therefore should be reduced.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is argued by some individuals that level of violence on the television screens has downside impacts on our public growth and as a result, it should be minimized. I agree with the notion because the videos provide opportunity to learn criminal activity and increases panic level in children.
To begin with, violent crime scene presented in films shows adverse effect on adolescents; therefore, such things must be controlled while representing on public channels. Ferocious acts from television can create a fear and panic among youngsters and curb them to leave their home, which directly makes them less social. For instance, news of increase in rapes and killings during night can restrict people from moving out of home and especially girls, where rapes incidence of females are high. As a result, children are persuaded to stay out of social network as much as possible.
Similarly, violent story presented on television increases wrongdoing level in community by giving different ideas to criminal minded people. Watching more crime episodes make them believe that such offence are possible in today world and create terror like situation in society by performing violent activities. A recent survey by national human rights commission has revealed that most of the crimes are from learnt behaviour, some from television movies and some from detective episodes. Therefore, state should restrict the violence on television screen to limited level by making people caution about the risk associated.
To conclude, I strongly agree and believe that ferocious scenes from home screen are raising crime levels and creating fear like situation in young children mind and preventing them from socializing, thus state must eliminate this problem by limiting violence on television.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 276, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lem by limiting violence on television.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, similarly, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for instance, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45519713262 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66782743457 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605734767025 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.022345941 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.363636364 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3636363636 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.091217360363 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378621570341 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360198988197 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0650376804482 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364174627096 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.