It seems clear that obesity in today's society is to some extent due to the availability of fast food. Should governments place a tax on fast food to reduce the amount of fast food consumed?
many attributes happiness to solvency. While money up to a certain level may be an element for someone to become happy, as it is essential for fulfilling the basic needs of humans, in my opinion, it is not the most important factor. There are more significant aspects of life, such as love and social security, that contributes to happiness.
love is essential for living a contented life. people deprived of love from their near and dear ones are often the people create anarchy and unrest situation in the society demonstrating their frustration in life, even if they are well off. For example, a recent research paper shows that most of the youths involved in severe criminal activities, such as murder, mugging etc., are drug-addicted and have insulated lifestyle, many of whom are from affluent families. This clearly shows that, even if you have enough money, proper love and care are imperative to live a quality life.
Another important element of life is a sense of social security. if people don't feel that they are not secured in their society, money hardly gives them a peaceful mind; it's rather the opposite. For instance, a businessman often will think about the safety and security for himself or herself as well as for his or her money.
In conclusion, although in the contemporary world one can't be happy without a handsome sum of money, satisfaction in life can not be achieved without love and social security. Above a certain level, more money can only bring luxury, that doesn't necessarily mean happiness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, well, while, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98837209302 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6631038034 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596899224806 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1928665922 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.25 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58333333333 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00890577511454 0.244688304435 4% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00321873735292 0.084324248473 4% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00727357254481 0.0667982634062 11% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00438399409538 0.151304729494 3% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00759330051328 0.056905535591 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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