It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is best both for individual and for society.
Do you agree or disagree ?
Marriage is a lifelong commitment, yet the propitious time for this fateful decision is a controversial question. Hence, a vigorous debate has been sparked over whether marriage should be taken place before the age of thirty. In my dissenting opinion, it seems to me that early marriage leads to dire consequences.
First, joining matrimony before the age of thirty contributes to increasing financial burden on partners. This is because they are on the first steps of establishing a prosperous career path, so that they gain less competitive salary, which has negative implications on their marriage. For example, they could be unable to cater the continuing needs of their family due to the exorbitant prices of basic necessities. As a result, if a couple has a disposition to join matrimony before they become thirty, they cannot fulfil family obligations.
Second, by getting married at the age of twenty, the likelihood of separation will raise. One of the primary causes why divorce rate increases is the growth mindset. To enumerate, inadequate experiences conduce to less personal aptitude and poor dexterity in solving problems; thus, the skill to cope with vicissitudes of life is insufficient which is a predominant factor resulting in marital discords, so that the divorce deems inevitable. As a result, this has an adverse impact on their children as they not only become aggressive but also perform poorly at school.
In conclusion, I take issue with marriage before the age of thirty because not only does it lead to raise divorce rate but it also places an onerous burn on couples financially.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 399, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
... family due to the exorbitant prices of basic necessities. As a result, if a couple has a disposi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18702290076 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9449947365 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625954198473 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.680575695 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.25 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152977405794 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053229181561 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395002831576 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0806362246461 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463221682136 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.