It is thought by many people that internet has caused people to become more isolated from society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, the internet is becoming ubiquitous, infact it is now the quintessential part of our daily life. A large number of people opine that communities are being inaccessible due to excessive usage of net. I absolutely advocates the idea and will discuss why web has become the major issue for isolation of people despite some benefits.
Primarily, the Internet is the major source of information that can be accessed from anywhere, anytime in the world. The easy availability of data refrains people to brainstorm the ideas and discuss the same within their group, as they rely more on information available on the net. For instance, children nowadays, take immediate aid from the internet in order to do their home assignment unlike earlier where they used to discuss the ideas with their parents, teachers and friends. This results in a profound impact on the lifestyle of people as they are becoming less sociable these days.
Secondly, the availability of various social networking sites, online games platforms encourage people to engage with their devices for a long time, this prevents them to build-up their social relations in society. To illustrate, people can have "100" or "1000" friends on Facebook but infact they are acquaintances. Also, in earlier days younger used to play with their friends, family in their leisure time instead of spending the majority of hours with their devices.
Alternatively, with the aid of the internet, the world is oyster now. This helps persons in several ways like the expansion of business globally, online classes are all the rage that connect people with each other in order to accomplish their goal.
To sum up, despite having some virtual connection through internet, it causes to widen the gap among the people. I absolutely favour the opinion that internet is entirely responsible for isolation of persons from community.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
... quintessential part of our daily life. A large number of people opine that communities are being...
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Line 1, column 223, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'advocate'
Suggestion: advocate
...to excessive usage of net. I absolutely advocates the idea and will discuss why web has b...
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Line 9, column 79, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'widening'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: widening
... connection through internet, it causes to widen the gap among the people. I absolutely ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26885245902 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83867784554 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583606557377 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0066321033 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.785714286 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19700403661 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713757821945 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329757794233 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113663301327 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478029935961 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.