it is thought by some that it is better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in countryside. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
In recent years, the development of metropolitan areas has enticed a vast array of populations. While adults and young people prefer living in a city, older people are more inclined to live in rural areas. In this essay, I shall refer to some general examples to discuss both preferences followed by my opinion.
To begin with, on the one hand, a plethora of opportunities for education and employment are the fundamental reason for the students and employees being drawn towards residing in the developed areas. For instance, a recent study by the Times Now shows that the establishment of schools, colleges, and industries in the cities have proliferated the population in metro cities. This is because not only their time and money are saved from the alleviated commute to work, schools, or colleges, but also, the daily basic requirements of food and other products are easily available in cities. Besides, the infrastructure of developed cities also tempts people to live there.
However, on the other hand, because of the quieter and less polluted environment in the countryside, golden-agers and retired workers opt for life away from the polluted and overpopulated cities. For example, a survey by the Cambridge has found that in last year, after retirement, 80 percent of the industrial workers move back to their hometowns in rural districts to work in their farmland because of the noiseless surroundings with beautiful landscape. Moreover, for farmers, rural areas are better because of the availability of agricultural land.
Having seen both the points, it can be concluded that the preference of the area to live in depends upon the age-group and profession of an individual. From my perspective, life in the city is advantageous till the retirement age due to the provision of opportunities, whereas after a certain age people should move to the countryside to experience a different way of living.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, whereas, while, for example, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19292604502 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02359219798 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581993569132 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.7412812081 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.583333333 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9166666667 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155715839146 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533322110595 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431663621863 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0868189879381 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368163575509 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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