It is a widespread belief that space exploration is way too expensive and money should be spent on other important areas. Do you agree or disagree?
People have different views about space discovering. While it cannot be denied that there are positive benefits to invest in this field, I completely agree that government budget should be allocated to the more essential issues on Earth as now will be mentioned.
First and foremost, global warming is the key consideration. this is because global warming will have significant effects on our planet. Extreme weather conditions, a high sea level and the rising temperatures are instances for its negative impacts, and these sign has become considerably than ever. However, the not only the investment in this problem has never been sufficient, but the plenty of plastics threw out the environment also increase rapidly. The best solution to this issue is that governments should invest in renewable energy like solar, wind and water power as well as promote recycling through their campaigns.
In addition, the standard of healthcare and education in developing countries also are primary concern. Poverty in many countries would relate to the economic growth of all nations around the world and the gap between the rich and the poor is more likely to extend. The best form of help for these countries is development aid. Instead of wasting money on space research, richer nations should invest in long-team projects such as building new schools and hospitals. For example, Japan, one of the most developed countries in the world, has just constructed Viet - Nhat hospital in Vietnam in order to reduce burdens on public hospitals. Without such help from developed countries, it will be struggle to poor countries to solve the problems by themselves.
In conclusion, it seems to me that there are enormous concerns that deserve to be spent money than space exploration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22377622378 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74715199428 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632867132867 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6372881731 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.714285714 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110367792312 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0348585520066 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516735182908 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884333398147 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610958977615 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.