In the innovating modernized world, collaboration plays an essential part in the overall development of the country. Team sport is an indispensable education for the youth to have cooperated, culminating the coordination within the community.
When it comes to the beneficial prospect of teamworking sport, conspicuously, it makes a significant contribution to enhancing the personal skill of children. In fact, each member of a team assigns a set of responsibilities, also the specific role to achieve the final trophy. In order to be a champion, in the practicing of training in the yard period, the youngsters have self-realized their obstacles and weak-points to ameliorate the worst constraints, reaching the sense of triumph. Another worth mentioning merit is that the advanced techniques of brain-storming can be accomplished by the challenges of the team sport, especially, strengthening the mental ability to think out of the box. Particularly, some scientific research illustrates the thinking speed of a toddler who soonly accesses with football games. They are more creative and motive in the age of adolescent, moreover, they can be a pillar of their nation, fostering the innovation of productivity in the economic sector.
As a growing recognition, team sports such as soccer, basketball, and baseball demand for the mutual understanding and communication between participated teammates. This means children enrich their social life, opening many opportunities to be able to make a new relationship because of any kind of sport requires opponents. Besides, attending teamworking sport gradually increase a tightening connection among participants. From that, the collaboration will be born if children share the though together for the winning purpose. Indeed, the efficiency of sharing the same idea tremendously brings out an incredibly massive change when they working or studying, enabling the hidden ability for society dedication.
To conclude, team sports provide an amazing environment where a student can learn group work strategies which support their physical and mental development. Thus, team sports should be the utmost recommendation for the young generation.
- Space exploration cost tax payers an exorbitant amount of money each year. What are the advantages and disadvantages of spending money on space exploration? 84
- Some people think the money spent in developing the technology for space exploration is not justified. There are more beneficial ways to spend this money. To what extend do you agree or disagree?（2018.12.01 89
- The graph below shows the rate of smoking per 1000 people in Someland from 1960 to 2000. 78
- The chart below show the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010 78
- The first chart below gives information about the money spent by British parents on their children’s sports between 2008 and 2014. The second chart shows the number of children who participated in three sports in Britain over the same time period. 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 83, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to group'
Suggestion: to group
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, so, then, thus, in fact, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1873.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71036585366 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39600619048 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643292682927 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0792156782 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.866666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146382465978 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487180903729 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362897032546 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102828826664 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420714903819 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.65 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.