Learning to play team sports is an important part of a child’s education.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reason for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Sports are the most valuable training for children as it should be learned from birth. Team playing sports produce many benefits so it should be learnt for kids from earlier stages. I totally agree with the importance of educate children how to play team sports and I will discuss this.
Firstly, playing with other players induces some helpful results in child such as cooperation, team work. There are many games could be played to enhance our kid’s skills for instance football makes them practice sport for almost fifteen child in around one hour, this lead to melt the gap between each other’s.
Secondly, team sports replaces electronic games which lead to bad effects on our child, so playing any team match will be significantly beneficial than online matches .Although we cannot avoid our kids from play on their phones we should educate them team sports and by time they will hate online games consequently they will be involved in team sports which will make them healthier and beneficial to their society.
To sum up, education our children team sports will solve a lot our modern problems and we will gain a lot of benefits, and we should also balance between these sports and scientific studies in order to get our kids highly well healthy educated ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1072.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96296296296 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38062020023 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597222222222 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 506.74238477 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.949690806 49.4020404114 229% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 153.142857143 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8571428571 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.2857142857 7.06120827912 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189057829968 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110307875821 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347518130963 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12645275881 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595981336667 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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