The level of noise around us is constantly increasing and is affecting the quality of our lives. What causes this noise? What should be done about it?
In this era of globalization, the amount of noise has drastically increased due to more usage of provate vehicles and industrialized with adverse effect on our lives. There are few measure that government should implement to reduce the noise for healthy atmosphere in the cities.
Nowadays, the utmost reason for increased amount of sounds in the atmosphere is due to private and public vehicles. The usage of private cars has being increase which leads to traffic congestion in most of the countries. The traffic on roads in turn result into disturbing noise due to vehicle horns and engines. The other contributing factors are loud music speaker used by people on roads as part of celebration and the industrial development.
Moving toward the step that needs to be taken to decrease the amount of sound in the surrounding is car honking should be ban in the cities. The government should charge people for use car horns. For example, in Canada if a person use the horn of his car it is considered as to be disrespectful act and is charged a fine of 100 dollars.
The another way to eliminate sounds in the atmosphere is that the industries and factories be built-in suburbs and not in residential areas. The authority bodies should set a law that allows only those factories be built in city area which produces the noise that is very well tolerated by human and animals.
To recapitulate, the transporting vehicles and other industrial development has led to increase the noise in the city area and has fatal effects on our lives. The government should develop laws that will limits the use of vehicle horns and factories set up be allowed in outskirts area only.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 178, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun measure seems to be countable; consider using: 'few measures'.
Suggestion: few measures
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Line 3, column 314, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...noise due to vehicle horns and engines. The other contributing factors are loud mus...
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Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'banned'?
Suggestion: banned
...he surrounding is car honking should be ban in the cities. The government should ch...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87412587413 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78391072629 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513986013986 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5865732232 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.230769231 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1952220238 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726856670411 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500413783395 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117809552171 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495335258962 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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