In this sophisticated era, today are interest used the businessman, engineer and toddlers. In fact interest is very common in the home and some people used the wi-fi. I disagree this statement. I will discuss in my essay.
Gone on the days, nowadays youngerster are alot of time spend in the Internet website. They are always time available in telecommunications. For instance, whatsapp, Snapchat, Twitter or and Facebook and so on. They are play more games in the Internet. They could not performance outdoor activity because it is interest on electronic gadgets. Otherwise, they do not involve any activities like talk, study, participate functions dance, sing, outdoor activities so on. They always time to introvert in himself.
Nevertheless, some people believe that public library is not a waste of money because of many reasons. In modernisation era, juveniles do not focus on study. They are time killing in their life. Moreover, I think teenager spent time in public library there is increase knowledge day by day. Last but not the least, they make new friends and pupils can be active all the module.
To summarise, after analysing that issue reckon, children age is very golden period in their life. In my opinion, children mind is very sharp and it easily catch all new thing. This age pupils learnt good thing and bad thing but Internet help for elder person .
- Do you think card less society is realistic and why? what are the advantages and disadvantages 78
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- The charts below give information about the way in which was in different countries in 2000. Water use, selected countreis-2000. 67
- The diagrams below the change that have taken place at west park secondary school since its construction in 1950.Summarise the infornation by selectung and reporting the main features and make comparsions where relevant. 67
- In some countries it is illegal employers to reject job appications on the basis of age criteria .it a positive or negative development. 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, for instance, i think, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1154.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03930131004 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78526268047 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633187772926 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4940436763 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.7368421053 106.682146367 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.0526315789 20.7667163134 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.31578947368 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0835266497516 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0256837757681 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427031458866 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0440196428054 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539309811299 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.06 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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