Modern world is the world of technology and information . Travelling and touring is indispensable part of their life . It is true that travelling and touring fully advantage for human being life . I fully agree this statement. I will discuss my upcoming paragraph.
In sophisticated era, nowadays education is most of essential part in their life. Therefore, they are very touch competition all the module like study, outdoors activities , travelling one to another places.In my view,study is an incomplete without the travelling.I thing travelling is important part of life.For instance,todays all age groups are travelling like schools, universities, job and go they relatives homes. They are all time used the transportion system
On the flip side, todays youngersters are very curious about cloud go to abroad. Afterthat, touring and travelling basic principles of their society . Last but not the last, travelling is one of the best good touring such as they are learning new language . For instance, Spanish, French , German and I thing English language is easily to talk anybody can used to many countries
I summarise, after analysing that issue that. In my mind, travelling and touring is the blackbore in their life. I thing there are learn many foreign language and increase knowledge day by day one to another places on the travelling
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, for instance, such as, in my view, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1135.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 214.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30373831776 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02667921057 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598130841121 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 78.884380977 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3076923077 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4615384615 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282519999824 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106628151971 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104532969144 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176706670406 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178629632891 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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