Factory farming is becoming a major revenue carcer in many countries.what are the advantages and disadvantage of factory farminG

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Factory farming is becoming a major revenue carcer in many countries.what are the advantages and disadvantage of factory farminG

In the globalisation era, today technology fast is very fast. Dwellers are use the electronic gudgets rathan than work.I am disagree with this statement.There are plethora reason behind it.I will dicuss my point of view in upcoming paragraph.

According to me, farming play a vital role in human being life.Hence, farmering are give crop,food and harvest etc.Afterthat, today factory are open in any nations.I think that, they should be detrimental impact in the human being life .There are uplift up all of diseases.For instances,hypertension,
anxiety,depression,blood pressure, heart disease,cardiac and obesity etc.But also,there have umpteen factories open in any countries.In my mind, they should be harmful to all the dweller life.Therefore,factories always open in any times.

Nevertheless, some people believe that village farming is one of best because they always supply the freshment fruits, vegetables, crops and health all types of food compare to the factor farming.otherwise, there is no deyning the fact that factory farming could be umpteen save stone always in any years. I think that, they have cause alots of health problem in their human being life.Last but not the least, factory farming cause plethore pollution in the public areas .For instance,air,
Land,noise,soil and water pollution etc. In my opinion,pollutions are very detrimental to all age group like toddler,Juvenile,teenager,adolescent and old so on.

In summarise,after issue that issue reckon,in my view,there is no doubt is village farming is best according to factory farming because factory cause umpteen pollution. As far as they could not supply the refreshment materials to the customers and but also,they have bad impact in their human life.I think that,life is golden period in any age and I could not be
Promote to bad thing in my life.As well as,according to me,village farming is best forever in any generations.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, for instance, i think, no doubt, as well as, in my opinion, in my view

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 10.5418719212 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1207.87684729 135% => OK
No of words: 294.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54761904762 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.0065616157 2.71678728327 147% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56462585034 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 379.143842365 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.5024630542 176% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 138.873143552 50.4703680194 275% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 203.875 104.977214359 194% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.75 20.9669160288 175% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.875 7.25397266985 219% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.12807881773 170% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 44.0 5.33497536946 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170842740898 0.242375264174 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774069359089 0.0925447433944 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077483801062 0.071462118173 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0824177120567 0.151781067708 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615496214226 0.0609392437508 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.1 12.6369458128 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.48 53.1260098522 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 10.9458128079 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 11.5310837438 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.94827586207 206% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.3980295567 158% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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