This picture reveals that information of representation of an island, before and after the construction of few tourist facilities.
It is crystal clear that, gone on the days, the present time tourists are more facilities upsurge up day by day. Therefore, there are plethora things available. For instance, houses, restaurant, sea, plater, footpath and accommodation so on. There have umpteen tress and gardens.
On the flip side, back few days, in the past time there have enough trees and beach. The have not plentyproposed. In the present time there have achievement alot of things.
To sum up, in the past time there have only tresses but in the after time they have climb for the tourist facilities like restaurant, footpath and sea so on.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...e on the days, the present time tourists are more facilities upsurge up day by d...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...esent time tourists are more facilities upsurge up day by day. Therefore, there ...
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Line 5, column 41, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...On the flip side, back few days, in the past time there have enough trees and beach. The ...
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Line 5, column 94, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re have enough trees and beach. The have not plentyproposed. In the present time ...
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Line 7, column 19, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...nt alot of things. To sum up, in the past time there have only tresses but in the afte...
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Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'climbed'.
Suggestion: climbed
...tresses but in the after time they have climb for the tourist facilities like restaur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, therefore, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 630.0 965.302439024 65% => OK
No of words: 124.0 196.424390244 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08064516129 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.33699396548 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83692209112 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629032258065 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 193.5 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.6273888945 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.0 112.824112599 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7777777778 22.9334400587 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103102407844 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432969082811 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0979448436427 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952022552715 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128980232463 0.0819641961636 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.59 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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