The importance of medical technology, which has been always been debatable, has now upsurged a lot of argument in favour and against it, thus it has become more controversial. The substantial influence of medical advancement has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend in an integral part of the society in recent years. It can be agreed that upsides of medical advances are instrumental indeed;however, it has some drawbacks as well. This essay will elaborate both assertions and will provide well weighed conclusions.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why medical technology is unreservedly salient, but most conspicuous one lies in the fact that medical science has invented new machines and introduced many medicine for almost every disease. Over the past years Medical advancements;for instance, upgraded their level of research to acquire their goals. Therefore, it is a vital time for people to appreciate the significance of medical advancement for amelioration of society.
However, there are some people, who choose to think differently and hold an opposing view point which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of Medical science. Nevertheless, the contradiction is rooted in the fact that medical terms can be calamitous in various circumstances as they are still new to use. For instance, it could be life taking technologies. Hence, it is apparent that downside of medical science cannot be overlooked.
The above dissertation illustrates both perspectives about the impact of medical technologies, while it is evident that it has various benefits, although it’s deleterious effects cannot be ignored and have to be well addressed and well balanced against its merits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 269.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47955390335 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11607142791 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591078066914 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.5670366349 50.4703680194 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.833333333 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.25397266985 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.33497536946 206% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160770052868 0.242375264174 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590477655287 0.0925447433944 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350110541015 0.071462118173 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952449287681 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039782456691 0.0609392437508 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 11.5310837438 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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