the majority of children are raised by their grandparents due to the fact that their parents are busy working. is this positive or negative development? why?
The issue of whether or not grandparents should take care of their grandchildren is debatable. In recent times, most parents are dual-income and children have no choice but to spend their time with grandparents. It seems that although this attitude would have a few negative effects, the evidence will show that the advantages would be superior.
Admittedly, grandfathers and grandmothers have been retired. Therefore, they have enough time to bring children up carefully. By this manner not only do they pass their time delightedly but also give children an opportunity to find a companion for playing. However, it should be considered that when the age reaches about 50 or over then, people are usually at the risk of diseases like Alzheimer that may impact badly on babies. For example, if grandparents forgot to feed infants, they would suffer from malnutrition.
Another benefit of keeping kids by grandparents would be acquisition many skills. Aging provides a great deal of experience about how a child will be well brought up. It is obvious that the more grandparents are skilled the more children be fostered in terms of professional and personal life. Although it may correct to say that a knowledgeable nanny could provide this condition, the expenditure related to her can be saved for other periods of children's life.
Overall, it can be said that in spite of a few adverse effects of keeping children by grandparents, they would bring many benefits for both children and parents. I do believe that this kind of children will be successful in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
The issue of whether or not grandparents should take care of their ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dren will be successful in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, for example, kind of, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08108108108 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92012906213 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606177606178 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0524311356 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168800982595 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605671630527 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463983015283 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110579736096 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474771566355 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.