The majority of news being reported is bad news such as wars, famines, accidents and crime.
Why do you think that is?
Do you think the news should be a balance of both good and bad news?
News related to battles, dearth of food, road rage and felony is being reported by media houses. As per my opinion, the plausible reasons for this maneuver are psychology of the human beings as well as news channels want to get high TRP (Target rating points) by reporting these kind of news. Furthermore, there should be an equilibrium between good and bad news.
To commence with, mindset of people are changed as compared to previous era. As everyone is living under immense pressure and fear, it gives them a relief to watch or read news in which others are suffering from a lot of trouble and people feel gratitude that they are not victims. Secondly, news channels are in the race of achieving the highest TRP; therefore, they always in search of spicy and bad news to broadcast in their news channels because they know that it will get them the highest viewers. So, I deem that these could be the reasons that why bad news is being broadcasted by news houses.
News should be balanced in terms of good and bad because people should also get aware with the noble causes which are done in the society. Constant bombarding of bad news could cause catastrophic implications on the society, it is very essential to show the brighter side as well to halt this situation. Otherwise, it will create a wrong impression on the mind-set of the people which is ultimately undesirable for the betterment of the society. To exemplify, news related to charity will encourage people to give donation. Thus, I could say that news should be in equilibrium.
To recapitulate, although, people like to watch bad news and to get higher TRP media houses are broadcasting bad news, I bolster the notion of reporting good news and bad news in same quantum.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-02-16 | ratnumohit | 61 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73442622951 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57519225636 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52131147541 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0060224995 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.076923077 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.433402862174 0.244688304435 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182594718685 0.084324248473 217% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116742366965 0.0667982634062 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.311425887979 0.151304729494 206% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432455147018 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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