Many animal species in the world are becoming extinct nowadays. Some people say that countries and individuals should protect these animals from dying out, while others say that we should concentrate more on problems human beings. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion
Environmentalist often talks about endangered animals and plead to take necessary steps to avoid extinction of such animals. However, some people feel that human related problem should be dealt first and people should try to find out the solution of those problems. I my view, it is important to save animals from extinction and also make efforts to deal with problems affecting humans.
It is considered that every living thing such as human, birds, animals and even plants etc. have something to contribute on this planet and any of these are made to extinct, it will largely affect the eco-system. For example, butterflies are considered as key sprinkler on plants that helps the plants to grow and adapt the different environment. Furthermore, animals are part of food chain system and according the Darwin theory, one small animal is the food for next bigger animal. If any species is no more exists, then food chain system will get disturbed.
There is no doubt that human soul are most important and intelligent than animals so people feel that privilege should be given to human problems. Around the world, human suffer invariably owing to problem such as fatal disease, hunger, unavailability of clean water etc. and suffering in various countries describes that enough is not being done to protect the human race. For instance, an epidemic Ebola killed so many people in Africa and still we do not have full proof vaccination to save people. Besides this, environmental related problem especially global warming is affecting both humans and animals. It is said that if problem is not tackled that whole world may extinct after some point in future.
To conclude, for saving the ecology and of course history, endangered animals should be protected and step should be taken. But human issues and problem should be given priority in order to avoid mass destruction on this planet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, then, for example, for instance, no doubt, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05111821086 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59133202894 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594249201278 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 18.4677717592 49.4020404114 37% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.8125 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5625 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303430738049 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915615113926 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485373304569 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183088339671 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555467960724 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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