It is true that, in this contemporary era, migration is being done from rural areas to urban areas by many individuals. However, sizeable majority of masses introspect that living in cities are really fascinating instead of countryside. According to my perspective, city life is much better as compared to rural areas.
To commence with, people want to live or settle in cities because of outstanding amenities like, medical facilities, education, transportation, advanced technologies and so on. Additionally, we have plethora of wholesale markets in every big city from where we can easily purchase any product in cheap rates. Another reason could be, for getting jobs because in rural areas there are no more jobs available and facilities too. Moreover, they prefer to come in metropolitan cities for generating high income. To exemplify, according to a survey, it can be manifested that more than 90% people in big cities are getting professional services in health sector and in others as well but it is not possible in rural areas.
Looking on the other view, staying in countryside has also overabundance of benefits. First and foremost, fresh air could be easily taken by us which is not possible in big cities because of air pollution. Secondly, we can spend our leisure time peacefully in villages due to less population. Furthermore, nobody can disturb us. Thirdly, people live with each other and endeavour to maintain good bonding but in cities people do not have much time to spend with their families. For instance, my grandparents have been living in countryside for last 8 years because they wanted to live in silence place rather than overcrowded places.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly, rural areas have plethora of advantages like, peacefully life, no pollution yet, we must understand that metropolitan cities play an indispensable role in country's economy and high technologies, professional services are being gained by many people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, as to, for instance, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26751592357 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99972952383 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601910828025 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6012514087 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.266666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53333333333 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145089679055 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483590143931 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037018866987 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0930448248671 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286395060123 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.