Migration of people has become a very common nowdays. In the today's world a lot of people prefer to live in a Mega city compared to the suburbs and mostly young people want to grow into urban area. I fully agree to the presented statement and I explain this topic in the following paragraph.
Analysing the statement and explain further first and foremost World Population are increasingly moving from rural to urban area because of good amenities
Urbanization to provide different luxurious facility such as Healthcare, education, entertainment, big shopping mall and so on which is an inevitable for everyone. For example, there are big multinational companies available in it such as IT and computer field which hire a lot of employees in your company. Another statement, people can be obtain good doctor like cancer and heart specialist.
Furthermore, mostly village people go to countryside for purchase some basic things. In addition, poor people can be get a education with new technology. For instance, according to the recent reason by The Hindu newspaper that 90 percentage of students leave their village place due to the fact of study that means they want to relocate another City for getting the best education. If the people stay in outside the village so they can be attach a high quality of items.
In final words, the opinion on par with that I believe a countryside provide different convenience rather than Suburb.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, for example, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1201.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04621848739 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83211043504 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63025210084 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.8327869081 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.181818182 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6363636364 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0651857214188 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0250762167628 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322521244635 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0385200649152 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373240759995 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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