In the beginning of 20th century, men and women are equal number of workers in big companies such as Reliance, Tata, Adani and so on. Government keep 50 % seats are valid for women in any type of sector. So, I believe is goods for everyone in society and I firmly disagree to the presented statement and I fully explain about these phenomenon in the following paragraph.
Elementary, in the present days women are higher in company than men due to their become a more awareness. The Mega companies dochoose the best employers for company who can be give better contribute for go ahead company. In addition, a number of women do jobs in IAS, IPS, DDO and Border Security Force and so on. Another statement number of men and women have similar qualification in University and college so, government should not discrimination. For instance, 49 % jobs are reserved for women in India.
In the contrary, if women are an inevitable role play in high level sector therefore which can be many cons of company because they do not get further education after they got married. They have a lot of an obligation of father, children, house and so on. Many times do not take different type of risk and this increasing the number of jobs for women is not necessary and the government have to compile companies to hire fewer women.
In final words, my opinion on par with idea that women are not capable for high level jobs because they have not ample skill rather than man.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 327, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this phenomenon' or 'these phenomena', 'these phenomenons'?
Suggestion: this phenomenon; these phenomena; these phenomenons
...ed statement and I firmly explain about these phenomenon in the following paragraph. Elementary...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...following paragraph. Elementary, in the present days women are more higher in c...
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Line 2, column 44, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'higher' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: higher
...mentary, in the present days women are more higher in company than men due to their beco...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the present days women are more higher in company than men due to their become...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...men are more higher in company than men due to their become a more awareness. Th...
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Message: You should probably use 'do'.
Suggestion: do
...me a more awareness. The Mega companies does choose the best employers for company w...
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun women is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...nment have to compile companies to hire less women. In final words, my opinion on p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, for instance, i think, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1207.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64230769231 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54999825756 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0524731966 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.583333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277667846741 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106343716155 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625213055409 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168129086693 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392747386984 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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